I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson, Ms Naicker and Ms Kirkpatrick.
I really liked your Stretching Sentences, I liked how you started off by she danced and changed it into "As the sun rose she danced slowly through the garden, Trying to find her true love. Keep up the good work, because you are amazing at stretching sentences.
I really liked how you stretched your sentences. I also really liked how you started off with a who. I also liked how your adding sentences on from the girl danced. Keep up the fabulous work!
Hey Cecillia
ReplyDeleteI really liked your Stretching Sentences, I liked how you started off by she danced and changed it into "As the sun rose she danced slowly through the garden, Trying to find her true love. Keep up the good work, because you are amazing at stretching sentences.
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Hi Cecillia
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you stretched your sentences. I also really liked how you started off with a who. I also liked how your adding sentences on from the girl danced. Keep up the fabulous work!